请各位帮忙修改一下这个英语小故事，自己写的，要求口语化！

It

was

time

to

get

up,

Ribit

was

still

in

bed

Mom

came

in

and

ask

him

to

get

up,

Ribit

refuse

to

go,

he

don't

want

to

go

to

the

kindergarten

So

his

mom

asked,

"Is

that

because

you're

afraid

of

the

vaccination

today"

Ribit

was

surprised,"Mom,

how

did

you

know"

She

smiled

and

said,

"Don't

worry,

Ribit

It

won't

hurt

at

all,

it

will

be

just

like

a

mosquito

bite"

Ribit

agreed

to

go

to

the

kindergarten

with

his

mother,

and

at

the

front

of

the

school,

they

saw

Ribit's

friend

Piggy

refuse

to

go

in

Ribit

stepped

in

with

his

head

held

high

Moments

later,

he

came

out,

walk

to

Piggy

and

said,

"It

didn't

hurt

at

all,

it

was

like

bitten

by

a

mosquitoes

I

am

a

man,

I

am

not

afraid

of

this

kind

of

pain"

Piggy

heard

this

and

went

in

for

her

vaccination

too

When

she

finished,

they

looked

at

each

other

and

laughed

together

happily

没什么大问题，更多的语言习惯的不同，还有a和the的用法。

我把所有的said都改了，这样念起来不单调。lz要改回去也可以。

本人其实也买过猪皮面膜，关于网上的鉴别方法其实也有，但是我觉得并不可信。都是商家互贬的结果，我买的就是假的，卖完之后用在脸上起了很多的疹子下面我会基本介绍一下鉴别方法：

闻气味，假的话，它的香味很浓 ，就是加了很多香精的结果对皮肤伤害很大，初闻起来会很香，闻多了会觉得 太过浓郁，很难受本人由于很弱会觉得头晕眼睛痛，用了 两天 就扔了（135元呐！）

其次就是看包装，真的好像是三个单词组成的（我觉得都是假的）green piggy 一定就是假的啦！因为我就是买的这种！血泪的教训！

像我这个就是会有很多的气泡浮在上面！基本上就是假的。但是之后用了两次或者用过之后会变得很光滑（不是我的皮肤啊，是哪个面膜会很光滑）

我用的假面膜放到水里的话是不会融化的！所以如果丢到水里不能化的就是假的了。。。（基本上是这样）

个人觉得这种猪皮面膜本身就是不靠谱的，所谓的辣妈节目个人觉得有点类似国内各大肾药或者高血压哦等等访谈类型的广告（这只是我的脑补结果，仅供参考），真实度实在太低，何况胶原蛋白本来就不是这么补得。还是买一点比较靠谱的名气高一点的吧。不要花了冤枉钱买了一堆莫名其妙的东西抹在脸上，如果真的想要补充胶原蛋白的话，可以把吃猪皮，一定要把上面的脂肪去干净，要不然会很腻，用砂锅煲，多喝水吃水果，多运动也是很好的。望采纳哦，露珠！

Poor piggy

Danny is little piggy, for which he is not happy, he hopes to be able to have the elephant's nose, the peacock's tail, the rabbit ears However, when his wish come true, mom and dad did not recognize him Poor piggy decision, still get back to their original appearance!

原文对话：

Poggy:come to the window quickly look!poggyit's snowing!

poggy:hurray we can make a snowmanin our garden

piggy:yes

poggy:mum,may lhave two big buttons

piggy:mum,may l have a carrotmum:sureheere you aremum:what are you doing in the garden, piggy and poggypiggy:we're making a snowman

poggy:look,mumthe buttons are the snowman's eyes and the carrot is ths snowman's nose

mum:whose hat is that on the snowman's head

piggy:lt's dad's hat

mum:and whose coat is the snowman wearing

poggy:yours

mum:oh dear!

问题及答案

(1)what's the weather like

It's snowy

(2)what are piggy and poggy making

They are making a snowman

(3)what are the snowman's eyes （题目你打错了吧？是eyes么？）

The snowman's eyes are two big buttons

(4)what's the snowman's nose

The carrot is ths snowman's nose或 The snowman's nose is a carrot

(5)what is on the snowman's head

lt's dad's hat

(6)whose coat is the snowman wearing

The snowman is wearing mum's coat

希望对你有帮助，请及时采纳。谢谢！

猪皮面膜辨别真假的方法：

1、正品偏青色，假货偏墨绿色，另外注意“collagen jella pack”上面的那行字母，正品为“Elizavecca Gpssn piggy”,假货只有“ Gpssn piggy”。

2、正品的塑封是有虚线的，方便用户拆封；假货塑封上没有虚线，拆起来很费力！而且塑封也比较粗糙。

3、韩国正品小青猪皮面膜是很精致的，假货底部很粗糙，日期印刷也很粗糙，明显字体很粗，油墨有模糊掉。正品日期虽然也有刮掉的可能性，但是字体明显娟秀很多，字迹清晰工整。而且最新版的正品底部有品牌和网址的标志钢印，假货则无。

4、正品有点油油的，因为真的是用猪皮熬成的，多少有点油脂。假货膏体透亮，很像劣质的果冻，没有质感。

5、挖一勺放水中，入水后，正品刚接触水不会散开，还是整块，挖出的边缘都保持的很好。假货一接触水，边缘就散开了。

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